Sudden Tragedy Umm, Okay
Here is some constructive critisim. And because of this, you can come to my music and trash the crap out of me and my music, but what ev. I dobn't know how you were micing it all, but you could here the strings buzzing and snapping over the distortion. That doesn't sound to great. second of all, I don't mean to be rude, but dude, your not a singer. All in all, it seems like you tried, and you've got potential, but you need a band backing you up and maybe some better recording equipment.
Sorry for the mean-ness
Tapioca S.G.